This week we have been making Haiku's. a Haiku is a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world.
A haiku has a limit of words so I couldn't actually add a lot more because that is how it is because as I said there is Seventeen syllables,in lines of five,seven and five. Sorry I couldn't do more
Hi Hana Its Hannah here from Saint Patrick's School Greymouth I really like the topic you chose for your haiku it reminds me of when I went to Barrytown school for one term we did haiku's like you but we did them at the end of the year so I did mine about Christmas and it also reminds me of when we at the end of last term we did Matariki Blog you later(:
Hi my name is Sam and i am year 5 and i like your Matariki poem but maybe next time you could add a bet more other than that it was great:-)
ReplyDeleteA haiku has a limit of words so I couldn't actually add a lot more because that is how it is because as I said there is Seventeen syllables,in lines of five,seven and five. Sorry I couldn't do more
ReplyDeleteHi Hana Its Hannah here from Saint Patrick's School Greymouth I really like the topic you chose for your haiku it reminds me of when I went to Barrytown school for one term we did haiku's like you but we did them at the end of the year so I did mine about Christmas and it also reminds me of when we at the end of last term we did Matariki
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