You have structured your writing well Hana and you have identified some valid reasons for why our marae is important. Maybe next time you could add a little more detail to support your reasons, for example in your paragraph about having noho in there, you could talk about why they are important, what we do, why it is good to allow others from around the world to stay etc. Keep up the great work Hana.
You have structured your writing well Hana and you have identified some valid reasons for why our marae is important. Maybe next time you could add a little more detail to support your reasons, for example in your paragraph about having noho in there, you could talk about why they are important, what we do, why it is good to allow others from around the world to stay etc. Keep up the great work Hana.
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