we were learning how to put facts into paragraphs by using facts and pulling some parts out to make a paragraphs. I found putting the paragraphs into order and making sure if they make sense. next time I will make sure the paragraphs.
This is a great paragraph. I like that you have added your own words to ensure it makes sense and that your information is ordered logically. Maybe next time you could edit your work to ensure you have finished sentences ;)
This is a great paragraph. I like that you have added your own words to ensure it makes sense and that your information is ordered logically. Maybe next time you could edit your work to ensure you have finished sentences ;)
ReplyDeleteI will,thank you
ReplyDeleteThat showed me more then i knew about sharks good job:)
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